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Friday, April 21, 2006

My Darkness Comments

Rating: ★4.3

In the darkness
From the whispers of your voice
To seeing your face
My tears haven’t stopped
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Asha Adeana

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David Linke 21 April 2006

Great poem, especially like the way it ended. Also thought I sould mention that in the fourth line you sould have used havn't instead of hasn't and until is spelled with a 'u'.

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