Dorian Petersen Potter

My Date With Kate (Rhyme)

(A Children poem)


It's past ten o'clock
And I have an awesome date
To skate somewhere with my friend Kate
But I was running very kind of late
Which wasn't at all that great
So I hurried along fast straight
Right in my very nice and brand-new skate
Till I crashed and landed right at her gate
And that was folks the end of my dreamy date
With my nice skate and my very good friend Kate.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


June.13.2 017

Topic(s) of this poem: humorous

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 13, 2017

Form: Verse


Comments about My Date With Kate (Rhyme) by Dorian Petersen Potter

  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/13/2017 9:09:00 AM)

    Lovely narrative and an awesome date with Kate who had laid the bait with 'brand-new skate.... Till I crashed and landed right at her gate'. Thanks for sharing this hilarious poem.

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