My Day Starts With You. Poem by Amartya Ray
My Day Starts With You.
With you my day starts,
You are like a fairy in the morning sky
Who had enchanted a magic spell
With her beauty.
You may don’t know who I am
But I know you very well.
The first time I had seen you,
My days became golden days of joy…
Many time thought to tell the words
Of my little heart,
But my cowardly mask had made
A strong wall against my mouth.
Thought you would react in other way
And decline my request …
Or just complain it to the class teacher…
Whatever you do I don’t care…..
My understanding with you will remain
Forever……
Dear Poet Amartya…painted nicely the ‘young-age-love-emotive’…canvas Enjoyed 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Write more please
hi Amartya, nice way of expressing love, keep it up... that zing is very important which i could feel in your poem.....
The language skills you have, makes you swing the way you want to. It's excellent keep on writing don't stop there as you are an asset..
I started writing poetry at around the same age as you and I can see a real talent here. All the metaphors you have used with the ellipis make this a really beautiful poem about a teen's 'infatuation.' Well done. Keep on writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/9/2024 11:23:26 PM # 1.0.0.1119
An adolescent's infatuation. CP