bakuli bhakali

Gold Star - 6,033 Points (14/12/1986 / assam)

My Dear Cigarette Butt - Poem by bakuli bhakali

My dear cigarette Butt
Great is the one who get burned
For the pleasure of another
But dear
Never let you crush farther
He who tossed and smashed
Your burning blazer
With his shining shoes
For his erotic pleasure
He isn’t the crush
You craved for.
Life in the pile of garbage? !
Trust me
It’s not the life
You deserve
Oh dear cigarette Butt
There is somebody in somewhere within this world
Who waits with a sterling silver chest.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

(It wasn’t my original idea, but a response written to the incredible poem ‘To a Cigarette Butt' by Souren Mondal. I would have never conceived a poem like this. But reading the wonderful poem made me write it.
Please click the link below to read the original poem by Souren Mondal. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
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Comments about My Dear Cigarette Butt by bakuli bhakali

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/11/2016 2:08:00 PM)

    Nicely written....Great gesture by mentioning the name who inspired you to write this poem, I read his poem long back and was the first I believe to write comments. (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (12/8/2015 5:05:00 AM)

    A lovely expression indeed (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali (12/8/2015 11:36:00 PM)

    thank you..............

    Bakuli Bhakali (12/8/2015 11:35:00 PM)

    thank you......

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2015

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