bakuli bhakali

Gold Star - 6,033 Points (14/12/1986 / assam)

Please! Don'T Look At Me Like A Stranger - Poem by bakuli bhakali

Please! don't look at me like a stranger
I fear...
I may lose everything familiar...

I can't sit and chat
Drink and dance
when you're here
in fear..

Please! don't look at me like a stranger
I fear...
I may lose everything familiar...

Biker, hiker
Whoever pass by
Stare at me.
when you're not near.


Please! don't leave me alone.
I'm like a deer
in fear

Some knock my door at night
Some try to flip my clothes
In my lonely strolls.

Please! don't leave me alone.
I'm like a deer
in fear

Some kiss me
Some hit me
they'll eat me like the rolls


Please! don't look at me like a stranger
I fear...
I may lose everything familiar...

Market -malls, bus -train,
streets- highways
Nowhere I feel safe
I'm a deer in fear

Please! don't look at me like a stranger
I fear...
I may lose everything familiar...

Topic(s) of this poem: woman


Comments about Please! Don'T Look At Me Like A Stranger by bakuli bhakali

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/11/2016 2:10:00 PM)


    Outstanding poem...People see lone women as a matter of object, very sad part. This is one of your best poem, I suppose. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/4/2016 9:04:00 AM)


    In fear! ! With the muse of live and pain. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2016 2:01:00 AM)


    Don't be defined by what people think, but know yourself. could be our own complex. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/16/2015 5:38:00 AM)


    Yes.. One of the most pathetic things in the world is how a number of 'roadside romeos' as well as many 'civilised' men look, nay, STARE at women as if they were mere commodities.. This, to go along with several comments made in wonderful taste seem to set up the tone for how society views women.. A very powerful write Bakuli.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/16/2015 9:55:00 AM)

    hope world will change soon! !
    thank you...

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/16/2015 4:40:00 PM)


    In fear! ! To destroy your dear heart; but, try to wear the hat of love; and, move on with the truth. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 8:29:00 PM)

    thanks for reading!

  • Dhiren Doley (9/28/2015 10:16:00 PM)


    When you say don't look, it attracts everybody to look at you. Stormy poem. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 8:15:00 PM)

    ya, that's true! something we resist attracts more! ! thanks for reading...

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/26/2015 8:43:00 AM)


    Some knock my door at night
    Some try to flip my clothes
    In my lonely strolls.

    i am a deer in fear. you have described how so many young girls feel in the society. Greedy men around always. My prayers are for you when you are alone. God and his angels will protect you and you will get people who come as angels in a difficult moment. Be confident. Go through life with courage. wish you well. tony
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  • (6/21/2015 2:19:00 AM)


    People don't only stare at strangers: there are those who look new and fresh everyday, I think you are one of such; As beautiful as your poem. God bless you. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 8:06:00 PM)

    thank you.............! !

  • Anil Kumar Panda (5/28/2015 12:44:00 PM)


    I think you should always remain in crowd and stay confident.No one would ever dare to stare at you.Nice ink. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 8:06:00 PM)

    thank you...........! !

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/11/2015 3:11:00 AM)


    What a fantastic poem this is, woman, Indian I am sure. May you have a million brothers to stand by you so that you don't fear. We will fight together till the day you sleep without a drop of tear in your lovely eyes, sister. (10) (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali Bakuli Bhakali (3/12/2015 11:43:00 AM)

    Yes, i'm. Thank you so much brother! I wish every Indian will think the way you do.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, March 13, 2015


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