When He Said He Loved Me Poem by bakuli bhakali

When He Said He Loved Me



When he said he loved me
I made the sketches
On my journal
Of little fishes swimming in the stream
And I picked no fisherman boating around the lake
But just the purpled weeds surrounding it
Filled the pages
With life and laughter
But now
For a while
They’re left blank
And it’s just the scents of the old leather-bound book
That reminds me of those colored sketches.

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2017

Seems a deep meaning of utterance. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Deeply envisioned and aptly depicted. We live on memories. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks dear Bakuli, keep the ball rolling. - - - 10

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Bakuli Bhakali 26 November 2015

thank you so much

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Kavya . 26 November 2015

Nothing stays, only change is permanent. We have to accept the change and move on. Nice write.

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Bakuli Bhakali 26 November 2015

Thank you, Kavya! I would love to obey your advice. But I believe, we can’t always walk over the old wounds. So, either we must learn to live with it or try to heal.

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Souren Mondal 26 November 2015

Yes, the beautiful moments go away, but their memories don't. A fine poem Bakuli.. Thanks for sharing..

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Bakuli Bhakali 26 November 2015

yet we can't do anything to save them. thank you...

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