bakuli bhakali

Gold Star - 6,033 Points (14/12/1986 / assam)

When He Said He Loved Me - Poem by bakuli bhakali

When he said he loved me
I made the sketches
On my journal
Of little fishes swimming in the stream
And I picked no fisherman boating around the lake
But just the purpled weeds surrounding it
Filled the pages
With life and laughter
But now
For a while
They’re left blank
And it’s just the scents of the old leather-bound book
That reminds me of those colored sketches.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about When He Said He Loved Me by bakuli bhakali

  • Jazib Kamalvi (6/22/2017 3:30:00 PM)

    Seems a deep meaning of utterance. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/26/2015 3:53:00 AM)

    Deeply envisioned and aptly depicted. We live on memories. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks dear Bakuli, keep the ball rolling. - - - 10 (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali (11/26/2015 10:13:00 AM)

    thank you so much

  • Kavya . (11/26/2015 1:18:00 AM)

    Nothing stays, only change is permanent. We have to accept the change and move on. Nice write. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali (11/26/2015 1:42:00 AM)

    Thank you, Kavya! I would love to obey your advice. But I believe, we can’t always walk over the old wounds. So, either we must learn to live with it or try to heal.

  • Souren Mondal (11/26/2015 12:27:00 AM)

    Yes, the beautiful moments go away, but their memories don't. A fine poem Bakuli.. Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Bakuli Bhakali (11/26/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    yet we can't do anything to save them.
    thank you...

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

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