Christina Ader

Rookie - 128 Points (16/08/1990 / Omsk)

My Dorian - Poem by Christina Ader

they say, it`s penny deal
revealing cloaks of merits
and asperities of life.

look at your hands, love,
they polished, milk and honey,
and face of yours
not even touched with wrinkles,
but grim of lust glows
on story-teller lips.

`live Dorian treads on the ground.
the gaze of wild, naughty passion,
the grip I miss.

and only rain can echo Andante
that flows out of my slightly trembling heart.
Ka leaving, the time of breath-holding.
submerged dead body in the Limb,
that tears it apart.

Topic(s) of this poem: ideals, love and life, love and pain

Form: Elegy

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Comments about My Dorian by Christina Ader

  • Terry Craddock (9/20/2015 12:28:00 AM)

    Hunger Imagery Masks Meanings Coffee Shares

    intriguing imagery
    leaves a hunger in the soul
    to read to understand

    masked meanings
    behind words
    begs questions

    a coffee shares
    for explanations

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Written in September 2015 on the 16&20.9.2015.
    Inspired by the poem 'My Dorian' by Christina Ader.
    Dedicated to the poet Christina Ader.
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    Christina Ader Christina Ader (9/21/2015 7:13:00 AM)

    thanks for appreciation, indeed

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  • Terry Craddock (9/15/2015 11:09:00 PM)

    Intriguing imagery, leaving a hunger in the soul, to read to understand masked meanings behind words; would love to share a coffee and an explanation. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (4/4/2015 1:29:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, Christina. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

    Christina Ader Christina Ader (4/8/2015 8:26:00 PM)

    thank you for noticing

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2015

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