My Emotions Poem by Belinda Ward

My Emotions

Rating: 5.0


Though my emotions don't show,
I have a life, a mind, and a soul.
I may be hard to understand,
But if you listen, you might be able to hold my hand.
Few times I can't say I love you,
A lot of times I screwed up and almost lost you.
Deep down I've been haunted by things of the past,
It still hurts where you stung me.
My will to love has begun to leave fast.
But sometimes when you try to help me,
I feel good, and alive again.
Feeling like a new being.
What's left to gain?
Though my emotions don't show,
I have a life, a mind, and a soul.
You are the one to lighten up my world and cast away my fiery pit of pain.

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Basically, I wrote this poem because I was in a love triangle. I was conflicted by what man I wanted to be with, and the boyfriend that I was with was hurt and put his hurt onto me. The man that I thought I wanted to be with, I guess it wasn't meant to be. So we went our separate ways. My boyfriend forgave me, and loved me even harder. I knew from then on that I really loved him and that I had the wandering eye.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2015

Though my emotions don't show, I have a life, a mind, and a soul. You are the one to lighten up my world and cast away my fiery pit of pain. Few times I can't say I love you, These expressiong I liked very much: My fiery pit of pain haunted by things of the past, my will to love love is very complicated.. you are so young Belinda. it needs a lot of experience. For me love is a great mystery. i think love should remain a mystery because love is created by a God who is only Mystery for a human mind. Please go on writing. Writing poems has a effect of Catharsis. it brings purification of the mind and soul. God bless you Belinda

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