My Eyes. Poem by Trenton watson

My Eyes.



My eyes are weary,
For the things i yearn to see,
Your lips touching mine,
Waiting for my true chance,
To love the things in life,
I wonder where you are,
In my eyes i see you in the picture,
Of me and you standing on a hill,
Holding me untill u cant bare,
I really cant help to stare,
At ur beautiful hair,
It flows in the wind when singing its song,
The eyes i bare make me feel like a stalker,
Watching your every step,
Peeking threw the bushes,
When you move i silently cry,
Of the things im missing in life,
Your not here with me,
Your with the one you truly love,
Him.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dilshan Boange 27 October 2009

Truly a powerful expression of emotions which capture elements of the mundane and the fantastical which speaks in an inner voice that reflects a psyche that searches for a reality that cannot be....the imagery evokes very deep meaningful impressions and creates a picture that conveys notions of addressing the reader in relation to what is physically perceptible as well as metaphysical and of a more psychological plane...the feeling of being a 'stalker' suggests a conciousness which is questioning its own place in the scheme of emotions and the concurrent actions. A great piece of poetry.

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Livingston parish Louisiana
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