My Fantasy Poem by Michaela Tatualla

My Fantasy

Rating: 4.5


I used to have some silver nights
And dreams of chants and mights
A candle lighting in mid night
That full the room with light

Flowers blooming around me
Prettiness is all I see
A golden chariot that so elegant
Someone says it's a fairies grant

There's a huge pavilion
That covers the shy blue moon
An orchestra full of glee
And a handsome prince that is missing me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 27 August 2009

A lovely dream. Nice to read................10

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Eddie Roa 01 March 2009

a lovely description of a magical place. nice write

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Jim Norausky 02 February 2009

This is a very nice poem with good imagery and great ending. Keep writing. JIm

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Stone Granite 14 June 2008

Simply wonderful poem. “The shy blue moon” - excellent!

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