Tuesday, May 12, 2009

My Father Buried My Sister........Today Comments

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My father buried my sister today
My soul burns red with pain
No longer will I touch her face
Or caress her skin again
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Pritisha Sardesai
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Saadat Tahir 12 May 2009

hi Pritisha...so very touching the ache and hurt pours through so strong it fogs the screen and yes almost the room too... My father buried my sister today My soul burns red with pain No longer will I touch her face wow what superb lines truly searing very nice penning there...u got a tenner there and sadly cant say...cheers

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Cerys Grant 12 May 2009

We are never able to explain loss adequately... but this poem does, a great poem, but so sad, so real!

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maggie murray 12 May 2009

achingly beautiful words...Maggie

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Anjali Sinha 12 May 2009

a very sad poem may her soul rest in peace anjali

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