Not Long Left
My Favourite Critic - Poem by Not Long Left
after a long day of work,
and a steady flow of note taking,
i finally reach the warm welcoming home.
i go to kiss you and you offer me your cheek,
i have never known such love.
like a child with a good school report
I place my new poems upon
read them i say
let me know what you think.
within thirty special seconds,
you read four poems.
bemused you look up at me.
i have no idea what they are about,
they are just a list of words.
i have never known such inspired feeback.
i love you for your indiffernce.
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