Sunday, January 15, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

after a long day of work,
and a steady flow of note taking,
i finally reach the warm welcoming home.
i go to kiss you and you offer me your cheek,
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Michael Shepherd 16 January 2006

Absolutely delicious poem, Vincent!

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***** ********* 15 January 2006

Oh dear Vincent, it is so disheartening when family don't understand your reason or your rhyme. Happens to me all the time. 10 from understanding, Tai

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