My Final Bow Poem by DeAire Taylor

My Final Bow

Rating: 4.0


As I open my eyes for the last time I think of you and us
And what we used to be
We were once together
We went from a small fling to a big love connection
You were the air I breathe
The steps I take
The moves I make
The beats to my heart
And I need you now but you're gone
Like the last leaf on a tree
You disappeared like a vanishing act
I need you because you were my guardian angel
You protected me like I protected you
You calmed me down whenever I had a knife in my hand
I helped you wipe your tears away
And now that you left me
I can't live on too long
We will be together soon
We will love each other again in heaven
And now I shut my eyes forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Masaomi Tezuka 23 May 2012

That was a very sad poem, but it was very good and inspirational for those who are just starting as beginner poets. Great work! =)

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Ari Lucas 24 February 2012

i've....felt this way...too many times...before...i know...how this feels...how bad living seems to...be...without the one you love...i've cut before...mayn times...but i'm growing stronger....i know how to cope....by my poetry...everyone who reads my stuff cries, i've got books apon books of my poetry, the reason i am alive...to be a writer, a poet(:

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Neko Girl 24 February 2012

so much hurt and pain you have a beautiful talent and beautiful poetry keep it up :) and smile for teh days tht are worth smiling for

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Abree Wilson 16 February 2012

i really like that one its really really good

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do u lose someone recently

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