Broken Dreams And Broken Hearts Poem by DeAire Taylor
Broken Dreams And Broken Hearts
What are you doing?
Why are you like this?
You love me one second and hate me the next
You hug me then push me away
You're like a tennis ball being hit
You're back and forth
You hold me close and smack me at the same time
You say good morning and get away from me in the same sentence
But no more
No more games
I won't continue to be loved and hated by the same person
I cannot be with you like this anymore
So instead of sending you my pain
I'll send you a black rose
Goodbye
well written :)) i can feel what u felt dude.. what i liked that this one is so clear and transparent i like poems to be like that so u can directly understand the message behind the letters and i think u did a gd job :))
Holy cow... I love this.. So good!
i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! its full of feeling and honesty and people can really relate.....
This is really good. But I think instead of the title: Broken Dreams and Broken Hearts - I think the title should be Black Rose. But it's really good. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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ok u think im too nice.... this one could use some work. lol ^_^