Out Of My Life Poem by DeAire Taylor
Out Of My Life
You better back away from me
All of the things that you did to me
Are unspeakable
Inexcusable
Unreasonable
I can't believe you would do something like that
You left me alone cold and in the dark
All because of your friend
And now I can't to look at you
You disgust me
I never wanna talk to you again
I hope it was worht it
Cause you put me and her in pain
I threw my love up high
But I guess that wasn't enough for you
And now you wanna take me back
You wanna be all on me like crazy glue
I won't love you again
I'll never repeat
And if you trying to hurt
You better take a seat
Just get your stuff and get out of my life
And you better believe that you won't be my future wife
Now get lost
i like it but the ryme seem to fade whne u start this can't believe you would do something like that then it got a little more personal......then at the last few lines you started ryming again......i like it, shows how you felt
A brave attempt and an extraordinary work, good thought good flow…narrated in free verse, nice, a great work.
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SNAP! very energetic. i like how u used a single line for some of the words. it gives that word much more emphasis than capitalizing it and makes the reader spot that word immediately. ur poem is very real
this is such a good poem so much power with your words speechless as a little mouse wait i am a mouse lol you have power behind every word you say
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This masterpiece should be turned into a slam, it would rock! #i love it