My First Actual Rap Song Poem by Locura Alaam

My First Actual Rap Song



Chorus
As I went on living life
with sorrow sharp as a knife
I went through quite the change
As I look back: 'It's so strange'
I don't know good or bad
But here's the start I had


Verse 1
At some point in my life there was this girl I knew
Here's the story of how I had to say adieu
She showed up one day bright
So gorgeous shining white
Dominating my whole sight
An angel clearly fine...
I wanted her so bad, and told her how I felt
But she aint give a sh-t, and I don't know how I delt
With all that bullsh-t then, if it wasn't for my pen
He's been my closest friend
We've been together through
All the nonsense; truth or true
I was so young and stupid
Though I can't say that I rue shit
Despite the mockery bullsh-t
That I lived through...
That I lived through...
That I lived through...
For three f-cking years
Now I'm back and low on fears
My midfinger says Cheers

Chorus
While struggling on through life
With sorrow sharp as a knife
I went through quite the change
As I look back: 'It's so strange'
But I came out the rain
I don't care if I'm insane

Verse 2
Done with the finger back to the tongue
Verse 2 loaded and the words are hung
Take a good look as I get this done
'Cause after I got that sh-t slashed out
Got sucked back in depression about
All the nonsense in life that I don't know how
Or why they still exist 'til now...
Stressed to the core, head to the toes
Tryna find a way but locked are doors
Try to smash 'em, crash 'em down
They won't heed fists nor dam-ned frowns
((When you left...The change that you left...
Here's what happened that night...))
I reached a point wherein I say tonight
'I don't give a f-ck what's wrong or right'
And anyone who would dare disagree
See if you get a f-ck from me
I'm feeling high and to ecstasy nigh
The world is ill but a sicker psyche
I got in me; keep the murder inside
'Cause I'm tonight to the utmost alive

Chorus
As I went on living life
With sorrow sharp as a knife
I went through quite the change
As I look back: 'It's so strange'
But that's the story how
I got to this point now

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was the first ACTUAL rap song that I have written and worked well fitting the beat that it was meant for very well. It talks a bit about some changes that I have had through the past few years of my life.
NOTE: The 'My midfinger says cheers' part is not to the girl, a definite no, it is meant to show that I'm growing to care less about the whole nonsense in life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 15 June 2012

So nice.It doesn't seem it's your first rap song!

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Rachel Streek 14 June 2012

I don't know much about rap but your lyrics are really good I like it a lot.

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Oasis Drama 14 June 2012

Great lyrics, hope you rap it as well as the lyrics 1st rap song? Good start, Never stop..Good Luck

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