The Joy Of Life Poem by Locura Alaam

The Joy Of Life



Oneday comes while another one goes
That's my life: so full of woes
Bob Marley said and I attest
-With so much pain that's in my chest
'Guiltiness' is no pleasance
It really 'rest on their conscience'
It grows inside just more and more
And makes their life indeed so sore
It's just like some God dam-ned flame
Does not become by time so tame
I hate my life? No, think again
I hate myself and that's the pain
I'll always be just damn'd insane
And sorrow'll all my gain remain

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Yes, the title is adopting Irony, as the poem is not exactly talking about the 'joys' of life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oasis Drama 14 June 2012

I like this poem, it's like i'm reading about myself. And that's what good poets are all about

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2012

Well tell me then who's here having the rest of their life without facing sorrow and sad time....No one, it's natural to feel that way but nobody ask for it nor want it...but that actually make joy become joy-er when we can find way to vanish the bad feelings...it's hard but we must fight for a short smile...it's cruel? well better dont think that, just do the best without thinking bad for the rest...may we will see the bold shine of the Joy Of life someday...but for now time will test, and it never stopped...so if we down, dont get downer just rise one more time...look for the sunset, once it down it will rise again...and it's bright_Unwritten Soul

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