Friday, November 19, 2010

My First Love Comments

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I still remember my first love,
And how my stomach turned.
She was a s pretty as a white winged dove,
And my pleading eyes she spurned.
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Juan Olivarez
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Lynn Glover 19 November 2010

Ahhh, those first love years, a peom that we all can relate to. Yes most of us did not end up with the girl you describe here. Thanks for taking me down memory lane and bringing back some of the love pains of youth. A very good write.

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