-my Freedom- Poem by Glamorous Enigma

-my Freedom-

Rating: 2.7


my Freedom, my Freedom
you saved me
you tore my chain
you detached the knots
you released my pain
you fixed the dots
thanks! thanks!

my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my necklace
you’re my bracelet

my Freedom, my Freedom
I feel you, I think about you
you accompany me, you’re my Angel

my Freedom, my Freedom
I like to be your slave
your slavery makes me Brave

my Freedom, my Freedom
clearly you engrave
my responsibilities
precisely you surround
my extremities
my Freedom, my Freedom
you’re my massive concept
my imperative impulse

my Freedom, my Freedom
I respire you, you inspire me

{October 10,2009}

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patience Tloubatla 21 November 2014

my freedom my freedom.....#it is a very courageouvs poem and a master piece*

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Muhammed irfan 20 December 2012

my freedom my freedom to enjoy the life which god gave masha allah

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Madina Morris 07 December 2012

My freedom my freedom is an encoraging masterpiece. It rough, but bumpless. I really enjoy this read.

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 25 February 2012

'...Your slavery makes me brave.' i love it. It's quite a masterpiece.

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Kevin Carney 22 January 2011

Again a great write, I take this as two meanings in one poem. I like the way you Freedom is your heart and soul to give you the courage and drive to go forward. I love you anology on this. Its a great write! ! ! ! 10+

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