Wednesday, August 26, 2009

My Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ahhh my friend.
My dearest companion.
Come, sit with me.
Let us share a bottle of wine.
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Thomas Taylor
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Saane Pahulu 02 September 2009

wow that was powerful. it shows that your friends could be your lover or your enemy! ! brilliant piece 10

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Adam Shirogane 30 August 2009

This is another one of my favorites. Your poems are so amazing

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Sara Tehrani 26 August 2009

The simple use of lexis with simple use of language but with a strong subject and very affective style of structure makes this a beautiful piece :)

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