My Heart Broken Poem by Baden Ronie

My Heart Broken

Rating: 4.0


And so i sit and cry,
tears of pain.
as i watch you,
fall in love with him.

As i watch,
you love him more,
so i cry.

To watch this,
is a great pain,
a hole in my heart,
an ache in my soul.

so i sit and cry,
i think of you,
& the time we share.

so i stand and watch,
as you utter to him,
those fatal words.
'i love you'

and so my heart shatters,
lies in pieces,
my soul breaks,
scatters in the wind.

memorys of you,
float through my mind,
joy and happiness.

never such pain,
have i felt,
so i weep,
as you walk away.
hand in hand with him.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raouf Ayoub 03 December 2008

Look I really felt this one but you still need to focus on the rhyme more. Bravo

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