A Lesson To Be Learned. Poem by Baden Ronie

A Lesson To Be Learned.

Rating: 4.9


i have a message,
wisdom to share,
a story to tell,
a lesson to be learned.

The earth is dying,
slowly bleeding,
humans are killing,
both planet and people.

so ask yourself,
whats the reason?
why kill both our planet,
and our people.

what reason or rhyme,
could we possibly have,
to do such a terrible crime.

pollution and war,
destroying a planet,
ending human lives,
all for not a reason nor rhyme.

the planet will die,
and humans will cease to be,
all the while,
the galaxy shall continue.

would we really be,
much of a loss,

its time for change,
time to stop the wars,
end the suffering,
and cease the pollution.

its time to learn our lesson.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
linda flynn 28 November 2008

well penned, it is reality............

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Ron Flowers 29 November 2008

You would get no argument with me about anything in this beautiful poem. Regards Ron

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C.H. Seow 29 November 2008

u know wat Baden? wonderful! i'm really into nature as well...read my poem 'to nature's path. to human's soul'

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 05 December 2008

Home made bombs that destroy our own home! ! ! ! Good job Baden.

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Phillip Mobley 04 December 2008

Baden... I found your poem to be illuminating and thought provoking. Anyone who lives on this great planet of ours, should. It's amazing how what touches our souls most can be expressed in poetic prose.

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Adeoye Olaneye 02 December 2008

Until words are brought to life we do not realize the extent of our actions.You write with your heart and bring words to life.

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Ivor Hogg 30 November 2008

I agree with your premises presented in poetic prose or free form But I much prefer metered poetry

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Gutter Box 29 November 2008

Good job...this poem is excellent It is very well written. keep up the good work.

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