You smile and nod,
Grin and laugh,
Hide your feelings,
Broken heart.
Crying at night,
Weeping in the morning,
Hiding in the day.
A friend says hi,
You smile and reply,
All the while,
Crying inside.
The tears come,
Thick and fast,
The pain burns.
Your heart all broken,
A thousand little pieces,
Shattered beyond repair
Broken heart.
All day you hope,
Tthat a friend wont notice,
The pain inside.
So you laugh,
And smile,
Grin and chat,
Aall the while you weep inside.
A heart destroyed,
Never to heal,
Pain unbearable,
Darkness coming.
Yet there is a ray of hope,
A shinig light,
Reach out and grab it,
And try to mend your broken heart.
Your somewhat staccato style is interesting but a spell check and re edit before you post is advisable
one thing that i fancy about ur poems is that the simple usage of words that made the poems outstanding...i think some of ur work and mine really has some similarities...'if heaven ever exists' is a good exmaple...
A very good poem, Baden. You should go back and clean up some mis-spelled words, though. No criticism intended. Regards Ron
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love it..... makes a person want to try again