I like to smile as you
But it's a cry
And I try to cry like you
Oh! It's a smile
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What a beautiful poem dedicated to your creator, simple, but yet very deep and spiritual, deserving my vote 10+
You personalize your God with refreshing candor and humility. I particularly like his gray beard - that you reject so prettily. The theme of this poem is rich and reflective. You are a poet through and through. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥