rachel carbis

Rookie (27th of september 1976 / U.H.W Cardiff)

My Inspiration - Poem by rachel carbis

You were my inspiration every day
but one day they took you from me
the one person who was there
to help me cope

so many special memories i have
the laughter, pain and tears
but now youve gone to heaven
it's been several years

i wish i could hear your voice one more time
if only to hear you say hi
or just one more hug
to say that ill be fine

i know youll be proud of me know matter what i do
who i choose to be with id know you'd approve
but i need you to know tho your not here
that i miss you every day and love you so dear

thankyou for the memories that we did share
for the love and support and just being there
i know ill carry you in my heart every day
and youll always be here in your own special way.

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  • (4/19/2008 5:55:00 AM)


    Rachel, In this very special poem one can feel the love, the longing and the tenderness as well as gratitude. Going back through the good memories is part of the mourning and accepting process. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 19, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 31, 2009


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