My Journey Poem by Black Mendilouche

My Journey

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Morning winds blow ice-bound air, in curling gusts about my hair.
Within, my toes are cosy warm - without, my shoes are scuffed and torn.

With face pressed to the north I walk, abjuring folk and idle talk.
If tears make tracks along my flesh, at least they leave me feeling fresh.

The future's near but not in sight and none can be my guiding light -
save I alone, and all undone. I'll build myself a new hearth stone.
A place where truth and hope reside, and there in peace I'll gently bide.

(February 2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 23 June 2009

The up-beat rhyme and rhythm gives the underlying pathos of this poem a defiant edge. This is a wonderful multi-layered poem. S :)

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Sally Carter 22 June 2009

This reads beautifully - everything flows so well, and I love the hopeful message. You sound a strong lady.

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Paul Hansford 21 June 2009

Nicely done. It has emotion combined with an intelligent use of simple rhyme, and an optimistic message.

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