You were in my dreams again last night
And they were plentiful.
You pulled me close and held me tight
And it was natural.
You kissed my lips and met my gaze
You took me high and left me dazed
And we are beautiful.
(May 2009 plus minor edit)
this is well constructed, and tenderly expressed. I think the rhyming and repeating line works well in this poem.
If I voted, which I don't, this would get 10. Just the right amount of rhyme, just the right amount of repetition, and you stop when you've said it all.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loved this piece.Try 'We Are'.