Kev Elmer

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My Life Must End - Poem by Kev Elmer

Wanting to die, my life must end,
wishing for this pain to ease,
no one hears the calls I send,
I'm begging for some help, please!

Cant you see I'm out of control?
This pain has destroyed me,
everyday is taking its toll,
I can no longer leave it be.

Everyday appears a new slice,
this pain I cant release,
no where left on this body to dice,
has anyone got a spare to lease?

I wont be happy 'till im dead and broken,
fed up with this pain!
No longer will I be softly spoken,
no longer shall I remain.

If only someone heard my call,
this pain could of eased,
I hope you watched me fall,
and your feeling pleased.

I cant wait 'till tomorrow,
untill then I'll stand tall,
I wont hang my head in sorrow,
because I can end it all.

Comments about My Life Must End by Kev Elmer

  • (5/1/2006 7:42:00 PM)

    Hey Kev! This is a great piece of work! I was able to relate to myself to the speaker almost entirely, a little scary. I will certainly be adding it to 'My Favorite Poems' list asap. This is very original work and helps to reader to get an in-depth sense of just how 'on the edge' the individual is...keep up the good work. Take Care!
    Sincerely, Sara Stowell
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 1, 2006

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