My Life Tastes A Bitter Sweet Poem by alex nascimento

My Life Tastes A Bitter Sweet



My life tastes a bitter sweet


Drop of a bitter sweet,
that has been poured in my veins,
poisoning my blood and torturing my soul.

Bitter taste of the pain felt in my mouth,
taste of a bitter life,
a painful life.

Taste of a life that stole,
my hability to be happy and,
taught me the one to be sad.

Taste of love and hate,
scattered in my heart,
bitter taste of the mark of sin,
printed in my skin..

Bitter sweet of life,
wich pushed me an endless fall,
of the sadiest taste of pain....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coach Roth 11 April 2008

I like the way you eased into this from your first line...some really nice phrasing...keep on writing...Coach

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Mary Ali 11 April 2008

I love the way your words touch my heart. Great piece. xx Mary

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Jolanta Gradowicz 25 April 2008

Good poem, Alex! I also feel the dropp of bitter sweet in my life...

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Jamie-lee Cuerrier 24 April 2008

=] Good job and with just a little more proof reading you could be sooo good =D

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kandii koted babe 17 April 2008

so understanding feels like you are in my head...

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Senamie Elisha 13 April 2008

nice write, keep it coming

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Malini Kadir 12 April 2008

Nice phrasing.....into verse unique.......title attractive!

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