Sunday, March 30, 2008

Cruelty Of Life

Rating: 5.0
Wish i could be happy
Wish i could be happy at least for a moment,
This pain has been growing up every day,
killing my emotions, destroying my feelings,
No one seems to see, no one seems to care,
Feel alone is the sadiest feeling,

People pressing me without ask themselves,
the way i feel, don’t them see i’m dying,
Don’t them see it’s hard to handle with it,
It’s so cruel when nobody understands, it makes me
so down and so revolted,

I don’t really want to die,
I just want to feel piece inside myself,
Is it so hard?
Wish i could sleep without cry, without
remenber this sad life, sleep with love
inside me...............

People killing each other, lust world,
stupid people, misery, what is happening here?
Every body is thinking only in themselves,
Omg where’s the love? Where are the good persons?
God, pls help to understand it because my heart is done...

Everything seems to get worse every day,
if it continues this way, this sad pain,
this cruel world, wish to die thinking i can go to a better place
and become an angel to fly and be happy....
alex nascimento
Joanne Kearsey 26 July 2008
well done. u write so well. maybe others dont understand ur side of things but I can see your side of it. its really clear through your poem how u see things. keep writing and soon the world will see how messed up it is.
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Mitta Xinindlu 23 April 2008
You realy can put feelings on paper and affect others. Your anger towards thi 'stupid' world is realy felt by me. I like this. keep writing
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Flávio Bhawk 21 April 2008
its beautiful, nice job (lindo cara, tem uns erros de digitação, mas ta bem expressivo)
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Izik Alcox 20 April 2008
I could feel your feelings through your piece, well done
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Dipika P 14 April 2008
wud just sum up in 1 word..'gr8'..
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Michael Campbell 11 April 2008
i thought this poem was very sad. but it is great that you can at least identify that life is not all fun. as long as you know that, then it might start to get better.
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Mary Ali 11 April 2008
It is such a beautiful poem, Alex. Very emotional and truthful. Thank you for letting us read it :) xx Mary
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Paul Butters 10 April 2008
Lovely poetry, Alex, to say the least, but I have to wonder at what price. Paul.
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Lacey Unknown 10 April 2008
This poem rings in every line with truth. Beautifully written. The world truly is cruel and is getting worse every day. I love that you acknowledge the pain and cruelty of no one understanding. Good write! ~Lacey~
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Cassandra Reid 10 April 2008
Great poem there Alex. I really enjoyed reading it.But it does seem as if this world is going towards cruelty and terror each day. Horrible well gotta jet ttyl!
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