alex nascimento

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My Life Tastes A Bitter Sweet - Poem by alex nascimento

My life tastes a bitter sweet


Drop of a bitter sweet,
that has been poured in my veins,
poisoning my blood and torturing my soul.

Bitter taste of the pain felt in my mouth,
taste of a bitter life,
a painful life.

Taste of a life that stole,
my hability to be happy and,
taught me the one to be sad.

Taste of love and hate,
scattered in my heart,
bitter taste of the mark of sin,
printed in my skin..

Bitter sweet of life,
wich pushed me an endless fall,
of the sadiest taste of pain....


Comments about My Life Tastes A Bitter Sweet by alex nascimento

  • (4/25/2008 4:19:00 PM)


    Good poem, Alex! I also feel the dropp of bitter sweet in my life... (Report) Reply

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  • (4/24/2008 2:11:00 PM)


    =] Good job
    and with just a little more proof reading you could be sooo good =D
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  • (4/17/2008 3:06:00 PM)


    so understanding feels like you are in my head... (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 10:42:00 AM)


    nice write, keep it coming (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (4/12/2008 6:29:00 AM)


    Nice phrasing.....into verse unique.......title attractive! (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 8:10:00 AM)


    I love the way your words touch my heart. Great piece.
    xx
    Mary
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  • (4/11/2008 1:24:00 AM)


    I like the way you eased into this from your first line...some really nice phrasing...keep on writing...Coach (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2008


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