My Little One Comments

A beautiful, heart rending poem. I like the rhyme scheme and the stanza ending refrain. Warm regards Ron

The rain set the mood for this poem and it captured me right away. A well constructed poem as well. The feelings are easily transferred by your repeated line. Just a wonderful display of poetry. GW62

In the sixth line, I think you meant 'verses' instead of versus. A most poignant write Carole. So very sad. Write On! ! !