alize raymond

Rookie (july,8,1993 / chicago)

My Little Wish - Poem by alize raymond

As i wish upon a shooting star i find my self with my head lowerd like i was sad or mad at the world an as i made my wish to be happy an explore my head grow lower and lower till i was crying on the floor no one could cheer me or make me crack a smile till the phone ring and an it was the man i waited for when i knew it was him i ansowered with a (what took so long) he said im sorry an we made up and went down hill wonce again

Comments about My Little Wish by alize raymond

  • (5/3/2008 3:34:00 PM)

    i like how it explains the cycles of some realtionships :) ive been there do you writyhe your poems on inspiration coming from your own life? i do it but only sometimes beacsue if something happens i migh regret wrtiting a poem and that would be the worst (Report) Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/11/2008 7:44:00 PM)

    nice written...pleasure to read......... (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 6:56:00 PM)

    :) sounds romantic, yet so simple too. Nice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2008

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