My Love (2) Poem by laila lili

My Love (2)

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I am asking my self if with your going the joyful will go
Is my smiling will be nothing?
Or I will live my life like when I was with you?
I don’t know why I am asking my self that although I know the answer of my asking
I feel that the life will lose the most interesting and wonderful thing in it
So the memories of the day which we were living together it will always beats in my heart
And your wonderful drawing will be seen in front of my eyes
My love my love forever
Our tear is the source of our sadness
In our tear will be irrigated our pains
To bear the joyful from the bottom of the sadness
And flying in the happy sky
Because from our tear will shine the smiling
Good morning to the most beautiful
Human live in my heart and running in my blood
And live between my parts
Although in my whole life there is no flower like you
Many time I thought to let you
But your tear was cutting my trying
So my excuse is for my debility that you are loving me.
My wish in my life is to dive in your bottoms
And to know the secret inside you
To know how you are thinking in me
And how my love hasing you tenderness
To know how much you are missing and loving me
To discover the secret of the magic in your eyes
My love in the past was like the circle between you and me
And today all body is knowing about our love
So the circle is broaden and it will still boarding to sink in it
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 29 June 2009

To know how much you are missing and loving me To discover the secret of the magic in your eyes love these lines of your romantic and swet poem..well one, you are really doing a great job and declaring yourself as a romantic poet... like the way you write... wonderful...

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Js Black 06 January 2009

Parting is never easy, but what will be, will be. Just gotta keep the faith. Great job...Jeff.

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