What Words Can Do! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by laila lili

What Words Can Do! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.5


He told me when he is dancing
Words but not just words
He takes me under my shalder
Grows me in the most beautiful clouds
And the Blake rain in my eyes raining fully
He caries me with him
For the night of flowers
And I am like a child in his hand
Like the steno which the clouds Cary it
Oh oh in his hand
Like the steno which the clouds cary it
He presented me the sun, oh the sun
He presented me the summer
He told me that I am his misaim
He told me that I equled many thousands of stares
And that I am a treasure
And the most beautiful pics that he had ever
seen
Words. Words, words
He told me things which make me sway
They make me forget how to dance and the dancing
Oh words
Words turn up my history
Make me make me
Make me a girl in moments
He built for me a palace from nothing
I don’t live in it for a few moments
Then I go back to my table with no thing with me
But, just words words
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazem Al Jaber 06 January 2009

words can make more than a weapons.. words can gives a life and can kills.. so beautiful dear sweet girl.. hazem al..

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

lovely write...with innocent feelings...words can we make us believe that love is sweet...and sometimes bitter....Words can make our head go round...lol..thanks for sharing....10+++

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Chris Newlash 19 June 2009

This piece was great, and thankyou for reading my poem 'Play me like a Piano' that was very kind.

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premji premji 25 February 2009

i saw a beautiful lili among thorns...........

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Rissa Martinez 28 January 2009

nice write.i like your style and concept of this words can do either constructive or destructive words can kill if spoken with harshness

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Jihad T 15 January 2009

Sooooooooooooooo innocent laila i like it the most i wish if i could hear it with music

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Derya T. Samsa 09 January 2009

How sweet! I really love the innocence of your words, Laila.

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