Unreal World Poem by laila lili

Unreal World

Rating: 5.0


i living in unreal world
you are his leader! ! !
so why is all this? ? ?
and the love is there
you are burnt me
with your strange questions about me
more than this your quiet and smiling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 18 September 2009

Sweet angry love...well said

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Vinod Kumar 15 September 2009

Real Agony of the Real Heart well penned, thanks 10

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Rup Pokharel 13 September 2009

good short and sweet art of yours. i enjoyed.10++++

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