Thursday, April 19, 2012

My Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Love is the oldest of all emotions
That was what I felt when you began to crawl
Your convulsions made me fall
I have loved you since Adam was a boy
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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2015

A lovely train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a love poem. A good piece penned with conviction. Thanks sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Shiela Marie Anunciacion 22 November 2012

This is a poem overflowing with emotions of the poet, specifically of LOVE. You can read, feel, and experience the different phases of love from the beginning to the end. From simply falling in love to being desperately in love... a feeling evolving and growing each time you are with that special person. A very well written one!

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Rajendran Muthiah 19 April 2012

You are ready to die smilingly for your love. Then she is not a flaw. She is behind your achievements. Having matchless splendour, she raids your heart to see if anybodyelse is there. Very good poem on love

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