My Love Poem by maryam balangi

My Love



My love
you slept
Midnight i took my gun
I went out of tribe that hunt big generals for you
beacuse you can for give their boots to country girls

I returned
for give me
I donot kill any ganaral
I donot rape any body
I never open fire
I for give my boots to enemy soldier
beacuse i was a lover soldier.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafiq Sandeelvi 03 August 2011

I like Jim Troy's heartiest comments on your poems..No doubt you know the craft of short poem with deep meaning and aesthetic power....

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Jim Troy 19 July 2011

My Love is such a great poem you have written Maryam..... You get better all the time Please keep writing.... You are very interesting to read..... You have such a marvelous style......... Respectfully, My Friend..... Jim

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Jennifer .. 17 July 2011

This a very nice poem :) great title and storie within it too :) great rhyming

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