Winter Poem by maryam balangi

Winter

Rating: 4.6


winter is hard long

If i donot reain somthing for me

It is a horse that i like very much

I burn him

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'AN UMBRELLA' on page 1.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 July 2011

very nice.short and meaningful.

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Jennifer .. 17 July 2011

Great written poem :) keep writing

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K J 14 July 2011

Another commendable effort at expressing yourself in such a unique manner, using simple language but conveying a lot.

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LoveLifeLen A. 12 July 2011

Wonderfully written Maryam...It's meaningful...I love it... :) Hope to read more of your poem... please keep writing. I'll give you a rate of 10 for this beautiful poem...

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very clever poem, says so much with a few very well chosen words, an a very clever mind./10

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