My Love Poem by A B Faniki

My Love

Rating: 5.0


My love even in anger she looks pretty
because of the subtle smile that sneak
upon her face like the beautiful light
of the morning ray that creep upon dawn.
if you ask me what stuff are great dreams
made of the answer is simple "My Love"
for she is to me like rain
is to the earth and like sleep is to
the body good through and through.

Saturday, January 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,good,joy,life,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
© A B Faniki 01/05/2020a free verse poem about what makes life sweet- what we love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 25 January 2020

Anger cooling magic rain. Love gets one more definition here. Romantic piece 10+

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A B Faniki 25 January 2020

Much appreciated, andr thanks for the rating. I really put my heart into it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 January 2020

A truly sweet piece....10++++🤝👌

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A B Faniki 25 January 2020

Thank you so much for the lovely comment.: -)

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