Wednesday, December 24, 2008

My Love And I. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Straddling a passing white cloud as a steed,
We speed the night sky, my love and I.

Into the unseen, invisibly real
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Fay Slimm
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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 December 2008

Very passionate poem. Yeah! I too was travelling with u. Didnt u see me....

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 December 2008

Passionate Fay, may your love take you to where you want to be... Andy 10

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Kris Smith 24 December 2008

My pc has just melted Fay have a great Christmas and happy New Year 10+++++++ Chris

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Reshma Ramesh 24 December 2008

supersonic love...........and beyond.............

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Scott Austin 24 December 2008

Hey my screen is fogging up….spray them down with a water hose and tell them to get a room for the night…lol Really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing… I think….lol Take care Scott

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 December 2008

Wooooooooooooosh! Ya got me P.C. wires melting at the connections! Amorous write, young lass....Sounds like a Christmas Eve, not to be soon forgotten...Splendid imagework...I like the theme......Very fine work, indeed, Fay...Just be careful how & where you navigate those sparklets! lol! FjR /*\

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Fay Slimm

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