My Love For You Just Isn'T Enough Poem by Dannielle Smedley

My Love For You Just Isn'T Enough



My love for you is as boundless as the sea,
My love for you is what’s weakening me.
My love for you is like a river,
So wild and blue.
My love for you is real,
My love for you is true.
My love for you is an unbearable pain,
My love for you will always stay the same.
My love for you is despairing,
and you’re not even caring.
My love for you is tearing me to shreds,
My love for you is like a demon inside of my head.
My love for you was true from the start,
But my love wasn't enough, as
My love for you is what torn us apart…

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Although I am only a 15 year old girl, I wrote this poem based on love, and the affects it can have on people; when in love, you feel as if the only thing that matters is them, they're you're whole universe, and without them, you feel weak. Sometimes, when you're in love with someone who leaves you, it is one of the most painful experiences you will feel, and that is why I wrote this poem, to show people that they're not alone. I was inspired to write this poem because I see this happening to people all the time, and I wanted to help, and although it may not be extremely helpful, I do hope that this has helped some.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

A beautiful poem with an equally beautiful note. Well done.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2013

love love love and love, love is union, love is also partition, good love, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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