My Love So Far Away Poem by Jon Patrick Lloret

My Love So Far Away

Rating: 4.5


When the light of the sun hits your beauty,
I feel the world watching as you brighten,
Shining with your eyes seeming so pretty,
It's as if your greatness seem to highten.

You are not just one pretty face you see,
There is more to you than what meets the eye,
You are as bright and smart as one can be,
Because your intelligence is sky high.

When I see you a smile grows on my face,
Yeah I feel happy when I see you smile,
But I always long for your warm embrace,
With you I want to go that extra mile,

It's crazy how you're just so far away,
But I just hope that I see you one day,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 March 2012

What a beautiful and romantic poems which clearly shows your passion and talent! One thing I am sure of, this is your first poem posted in this site but it won't be your last! This amazing write has become your stepping stone toward the top of the Poetry World one day! 10+++ Thank you fro sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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