Thampi KEE

Bronze Star - 2,899 Points (kerala India)

My Love To The River - Poem by Thampi KEE

But your eyes are shining
bright way you looks
shall we walk to the river
leaving behind all, to scoff

but the great sunrise
these old flowers
But you never know the scent of my rivers

I wish to show my old happy days here
I begin to write my love
where we swim and where we found him
The great joy made on me

Comments about My Love To The River by Thampi KEE

  • Unwritten Soul (1/22/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    I feel free with those lines..nice write kee_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (1/21/2013 8:18:00 PM)

    Thus to know the scent of your rivers, you are inviting your lady love for a stroll to the river side! I visualize you both walking hand in hand enjoying the cool breeze and watching the small wavelets! An imaginative write! ! Kee, thanks for the wonderful comments on my poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (1/21/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    Great sunshine begins to write love. good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

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