I Wish Poem by Thampi KEE

I Wish

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I wish
I will have a friend
With me to my dreams
With me to pray
With me to....drink

Not like to a mad
Not let me to mad....

I never like to read,
Never like to sing songs...
She may be with me to work
She may be with me to my dreams



She may be like to a child
she may be like to a wild.....

I never hate to your love
I never hate to my God

I never like to a river
she may like to dive there
she may die here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prasanna Kumari 15 September 2006

your wish is very strong here

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Nina Joseph 25 September 2006

'i never like to a river she may like to dive there she may die there' this is a perfect vision and it brings deep inspiration, what a very good wish!

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Melvina Germain 05 October 2006

A true friend is certainly a gift from God, to wish for such a friend shows you have a lot of feeling and a great deal of love to offer. I hope your wish comes true and you find exactly what you want in a friend. God Bless Melvina

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Anne Jojo 16 October 2006

true friends are real and rare treasures. hope u find that true friend....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 September 2007

and ur there to find ur friend in desire, and u deserve for the work done -really superb i would like, thanks sharing, ---weish u all the best to ur quest...

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Tiffany Tucks 29 October 2020

Pathetic

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2016

We are here for you Kee, me...and not only me but all you see...here...you wish comes true now :)

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Rekha Mandagere 31 May 2015

The desire for having a friend to live and share is so beautifully brought out with ease and care.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 05 August 2014

Really liked this poem, so well written....

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Lady Grace 26 March 2010

very nice words for a friend...hope my friends felt this words too...nicely done..

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