My Lovely World. Comments

the world you live in beats with a pure heart..and that is real...what a fantastic way to be...nice write Fay

I love the positive message this poem sends. A 10.

You're right. Sometimes one can become so disenchanted by the horror of the real world that our buoyancy and optimism can leave us. Your delightful poem shows that the one place (the only place) we CAN change is the place inside us and, in reality, that's the only place that matters. So dream your dreams, Fay and live your life in 'unseemly ecstasy' (lovely expression) . Well worth the read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This is a beautiful write from a pure heart thankyou for giving us hope of what we can achieve, your good friend Chris 10 ++++

Beautiful, thank you for sharing your dreams Fay, David.

Simply beautiful heartfelt poetry Fay...thank you for sharing it....Fi

This is wonderful & not dreaming. The reality of inner peace & joy & simple love of life echoes in your poetry & brings back what we all call out for. Thank you Fay : -)