My New! ! Poem by ramya bodi
My New! !
Being with you,
Can I call that new?
Because,
In my mind,
And in my view,
There's no new! ! !
In the mystical sue,
Between me and you! ! !
There's an amazing allure,
Towards me,
From you..............
But how can,
I allude?
By sitting together,
On the sand dune,
Can we jest,
Something NEW? ? ? ?
lovely poem, , wonderful self-chatting, , , beautiful quizes, indeed...thanx
liked these lines: In the mystical sue, Between me and you! ! ! There's an amazing allure, Towards me, very nice poem indeed
As it is rightly said, relations are made in the heaven.No relationship is new or built afresh.It continues for many births.Your poem has a strong philosophical back up.A very good poem.Thanks a lot for sharing.
You are a good poet in waiting.The beginning has the spark of a potential explosion ahead. The grip over rhyme schemes and diction will stand by you and your pessimistic notes will triumph once.Keep writing. Regards.. M.D Dinesh Nair, HOD [English] NRI Academy, Vijayawada,
really nice poem when you have inner courage nothing can stop you keep going you will succeed i loved the poem bcoz of this word sand dune and sitting together if from poetic view i will stare this line sand dune keeps changing its fate nice one
Mystical sue is a mystery for me too. Nevertheless a very interesting piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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wow! i like it! hope u keep on writing..the same way