ramya bodi

My New! ! - Poem by ramya bodi

Being with you,
Can I call that new?
In my mind,
And in my view,
There's no new! ! !
In the mystical sue,
Between me and you! ! !
There's an amazing allure,
Towards me,
From you..............
But how can,
I allude?
By sitting together,
On the sand dune,
Can we jest,
Something NEW? ? ? ?

Comments about My New! ! by ramya bodi

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    liked these lines:
    In the mystical sue,
    Between me and you! ! !
    There's an amazing allure,
    Towards me,
    very nice poem indeed
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  • Ratnakar Rout (5/5/2010 8:16:00 AM)

    As it is rightly said, relations are made in the heaven.No relationship is new or built afresh.It continues for many births.Your poem has a strong philosophical back up.A very good poem.Thanks a lot for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2010 2:58:00 AM)

    You are a good poet in waiting.The beginning has the spark of a potential explosion ahead. The grip over rhyme schemes and diction will stand by you and your pessimistic notes will triumph once.Keep writing.
    M.D Dinesh Nair, HOD [English]
    NRI Academy, Vijayawada,
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  • (4/27/2010 10:29:00 AM)

    really nice poem when you have inner courage nothing can stop you
    keep going you will succeed
    i loved the poem bcoz of this word sand dune and sitting together if from poetic view i will stare this line sand dune keeps changing its fate
    nice one
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  • (4/18/2010 2:31:00 AM)

    Mystical sue is a mystery for me too.
    Nevertheless a very interesting piece.
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  • (4/16/2010 3:55:00 AM)

    As a devastating cyclone on 13th instances put the net down, only today I had the opportunity of going through your poem. Yes, I like it very much, particularly the implied vagueness in some of the lines. It gives a wide option to the readers to interpret it in his/her own way. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 10:10:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed your poem but i don't understand what u meant by mystical sue. can u kindly explain it to me.Anyway good poem...keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/13/2010 9:04:00 AM)

    There is always a New in life and love, all we need is to explore... Good poem, Ramya. Keep writing.

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  • B. Alexander (4/13/2010 8:46:00 AM)

    Nice meaning - is this love new or did it always exist we just hadn't felt it yet. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 5:47:00 AM)

    lovely poem.keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 5:41:00 AM)

    lovely poem, , wonderful self-chatting, , , beautiful quizes, indeed...thanx (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 5:37:00 AM)

    lovely poem.keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 5:24:00 AM)

    lovely poem.keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 4:40:00 AM)

    wow! i like it! hope u keep on writing..the same way (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 7, 2010

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