My Own Poem by anil pillai

My Own

Rating: 5.0


whats happening?
its my own,
nevertheless.
its a flawless,
movement until the last breath,
the moment you made me,
moment i cherish

At the heights of
attaining glory, fame
one tends to slip,
had to suffer,
made life miserable
My world came to an end! !


copyright 2016
anil pillai

Friday, October 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: my dearest me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

Really an insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Anil.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 December 2016

From life to death all those we come across happiness, sorrows owned by self. Beautiful write. Loved reading it.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 October 2016

From the birth to death life has many ups and downs. A lovely depiction of life.

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Anil Pillai 31 October 2016

well what to say

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Anil Pillai 31 October 2016

yes..........it has ups and downs

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Gajanan Mishra 28 October 2016

flawless life, flawless everything, good

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Anil Pillai 31 October 2016

i feel humbled!

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